How can you pace your book?
- Move the dialog along and don't have random discussions about things that don't belong in the story or reveal anything interesting about your characters that the audience needs to know.
- Keep the scenes just that scenes. Paint the picture and then leave that canvas. You don't have to over-describe a scene. You want a balance of details to actions.
- Keep it moving from one scene to the next scene. Don't let it got bogged down.
- Don't make every character's dialog a monologue. People don't talk in monologues.